Girls and boys alike, what do you think of this poem?

I really like this poem. I too write poetry and generally I don't like other people's work but I do like this. This poem comes from the heart and it sounds deeply personal so I want to congratulate you on your courage for sharing this part of yourself with the world. I feel as if you are in love with someone who is unattainable to you. Someone who's life you feel that you would only complicate if they knew you harbored such deep feelings for them.